Tuesday, April 3, 2018

A Trip to the Farallones

Hank decided to enter a writing contest.  His submission could be between 50 and 200 words.  This has 197.  He said that he is hoping that he will finish at the bottom of the best entries.
He hopes you enjoy!




6 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed this story. It was great to see the pictures along with the story. It really added to what your mom had read to me on the phone. You have a way with words. I liked your descriptive adjectives and am glad that the shark didn't really get any seals.

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    1. Oh! I love your comment. I am also glad he didn't get any seals. I wish there was more about Humpback Whales. Maybe I'll write that one next.

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  2. Great job Henry. I enjoyed the illustrations. Great use of color.

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  3. Henry this is a wonderful book! I think you could be a famous author some day! Then I could have your books in the library :)

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    1. Wow you looked already! That was quick use of my blog. Thanks for doing it so quick. I loved that you said I could be a famous author when I grew up. I bet I will. We found out about the contest at the library. -Hank

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